24.8.06

Oh, how I truly miss
Those letters you sent
With a tender kiss

I couldn't come up with anything else here. So I started over.

With a tender kiss you signed these letters
In hopes that maybe we'd be together
But then again you had your doubts
Unsure of whether or not we'd work out
Isn't it worth it to give it a try
We've got nothing to lose, both you and I


I stopped here because I felt I ruined it with the last line.
These first few bits were influenced from an old flame I once had. She just came to mind one day and I looked at the letters we used to send and she always signed it "with a tender kiss." After reading those letters I was inspired to write. But now I regret it knowing what happened.

It's been years since we last spoke
Since the day that our hearts broke

This was a from a sad, foolish attempt to hopefully rekindle that. But f' that.

The thought of you, oh, makes me weak
Yeah, it makes me weak
So captivating I can't speak
No, I can't speak

This was one of the first songs I tried to write. I came up with this verse and a second verse, but it hadn't worked out and I dropped it.


Well that's what's on the first page of my notepad. Stay tuned for page 2.

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